Success

 Saki : Her definition of success is making great effort to achieve goal
           an example of success is "the tortoise and the hare"
           Her experience : she had difficulty to pass entrance exam of high school when she was in
           junior high school, but she studied hard everyday and finally passed the exam.

           Her presentation was good because she showed some examples and illustrations. Her
           definition had persuasiveness thanks to her real experience. While she talked, she didn't look
           she was nervous. These were good points.


 Arisa : Her experience→she was not good at math and science and good at English when she was in
            junior high school. So she studied English hard everyday for English examination. It was hard
            for her. But she noticed that making efforts is the most important.
            She introduced us five things to succeed. 1, write a diary 2, meditation 3, control feelings 4,
            having time for myself 5, patience

           Her speaking voice, facial expression, gestures, and speed was ideal.

 Mako : She talked about 3 small goals. Her real experience was so persuasive that I could easily
             understand what she wanted to tell about success. The words "If you want it, keep do it" was
             impressive.
 
            She speak with her self-confidence. Her facial expression and the pronunciation were good.
            But I sometimes couldn't hear what she was saying. So if she speak more slowly, listeners will
            be able to understand her presentation.

 Kenya : First, he said that he is not sure what is success. And he gave us some image of success.
              Success is composed by 4 contents. 1, making efforts 2, sacrifice 3, affection 4, hard working
              He also said "I think success is whether people satisfy with their own lives"

              I thought he is good at making presentation. Because he spoke fluently and made us fun. I
             was absorbed in his presentation.


 Me : this time I notice my weak point that the structure of my presentation is not well-organized.
        maybe listeners are confused. I want to improve my flow of the story.