Saturday, June 22, 2019
Success
Saki : Her definition of success is making great effort to achieve goal
an example of success is "the tortoise and the hare"
Her experience : she had difficulty to pass entrance exam of high school when she was in
junior high school, but she studied hard everyday and finally passed the exam.
Her presentation was good because she showed some examples and illustrations. Her
definition had persuasiveness thanks to her real experience. While she talked, she didn't look
she was nervous. These were good points.
Arisa : Her experience→she was not good at math and science and good at English when she was in
junior high school. So she studied English hard everyday for English examination. It was hard
for her. But she noticed that making efforts is the most important.
She introduced us five things to succeed. 1, write a diary 2, meditation 3, control feelings 4,
having time for myself 5, patience
Her speaking voice, facial expression, gestures, and speed was ideal.
Mako : She talked about 3 small goals. Her real experience was so persuasive that I could easily
understand what she wanted to tell about success. The words "If you want it, keep do it" was
impressive.
She speak with her self-confidence. Her facial expression and the pronunciation were good.
But I sometimes couldn't hear what she was saying. So if she speak more slowly, listeners will
be able to understand her presentation.
Kenya : First, he said that he is not sure what is success. And he gave us some image of success.
Success is composed by 4 contents. 1, making efforts 2, sacrifice 3, affection 4, hard working
He also said "I think success is whether people satisfy with their own lives"
I thought he is good at making presentation. Because he spoke fluently and made us fun. I
was absorbed in his presentation.
Me : this time I notice my weak point that the structure of my presentation is not well-organized.
maybe listeners are confused. I want to improve my flow of the story.
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I thought you should have paid attention to your body movement. Though you had some sheets which supported your points, I couldn't see them because I sat next to you. I know a person gives a presentation is seeing people who is sitting near to him or her without realizing. However, it was obscure for presentations. In the next time, I want you to put the importance on your body movement.
ReplyDeleteYou took an eye contact with us many times and your smile during your presentation was so good! I think your visual resources were mainly made by letters, if there were some pictures, figures and so on, it would tell us your opinion more effectively. I can understand your opinion by just watching these pictures without reading letters in the resources.
ReplyDeleteI should have asked to you " what does it mean to live happily?" because the happiness is different one by one so you should explain the point in detail.
ReplyDeleteI could see that you made graphics so hard. It was impressive. One thing I want you to try is put stress in your speaking. If you put, audiences can understand the important points what you say.
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